electronic-alterantive song

[gbav]

hey guys, working on a kind of an electronic/alternative song...first attempt at a rough mix at this, any mix/song help would be greatly appreciated..

songs "my friend(rough mix" up at http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=3452&alid=-1

thanks alot in advance, looking forward to checking out some more stuff on the boards..

take care
gary

 

[Cloneboy Studio]

Percussion way too soft for this KMFDM type of song. Low end isn't consistent... it comes and goes too much. I'd like to hear more seperation on the vocals, and more of a rich sound. The guitars are probably stealing too much of the vocals thunder.

So far the production is pretty good, it just needs some more work.

 

[gbav]

Thanks a ton clone, i always appreciate your comments on here very informative. I agree with everything you had to comment on, now to just get it fixed. Thanks alot again

Gary

 

[trogdor]

i agree the drums could be "bigger", and maybe a little less guitars. The production sounds pretty slick otherwise good work.

 

[CyanJaguar]

hey, good job. Nice energy. It got real interesting as the song went along.

not bad at all.