There's a loud pop at 1:03 and 1:45, and another softer one at 3:12 and 4:26. Maybe it's the headphones I'm using but I swear I heard a bunch through out the song, real soft ones though.
Other than just smoothing out the volumes, I think it's a nice song and some good guitar work.. But the mix sounded dark to me. Not a lot going on in the mids and highs on my headphones or speakers.
I'm sure the pros here will have more mix comments.
I'd love to hear more like this though.
~scott