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Hey guys ... new to the hip hop creating world ... just wanted to know how people out there like what we've done so far. One song is poor editing but the lyrics are key and the other is a sample soon to be done and edited.

Leave comments please!

triLlz


CHECK OUT THE SONGS AT www.myspace.com/dtrec0rds
 
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Any Comments ? esp on upcoming song ?

Why don't use start posting url's more appropriate?

You making a Bruva work!:mad:

www.myspace.com/dtrecords

#1 I couldn't find any music on your page
#2 Your page is too cluttered and unattractive! So if there are any musical links on there, it's like finding a needle in a haystack!
In my opinion, you need to clean it up a bit if you want people to peep it and leave honest feed!
 
You want it, you got it.

Overall, your mix needs serious work. Sounds like you're recording mics a bit too loud and then trying to lower them in the mix. If that's what you're doing, (even if it isn't...just something to take with you) record your mix low so you have more room to tweak it later without errors that can't be fixed.

Also it sounds like you're recording 2 or 3 takes of the same verse. Took me a long time to figure out how to not do that but I did. Until your game is up, don't do that shit. You can record 3 takes but only to see which one you like best. Once you do that, kill the other two and duplicate the one you keep and work with it a little bit (my advice is to delay a copied track about .0.45 of a second to give it a fuller sound with half the work).

Also, the beats are alright, but could be better in my opinion. Don't get me wrong, I've heard much worse, but I've heard more original too. They sound generic to me and they don't grab me when I listen to them.

On False Covenant, I liked where the track was going, but I think creativity fell off somewhere around the 2nd verse and dropped from there. You might wanna take this one back to the drawing board, it has potential to be much better than it is.

On Sample of Upcoming....honestly fam, this sounds like Kevin Federline ghostwrote it, and trust me, it's not good that I say that. It's straight filler when its intent was otherwise. Beat isn't helping it out anymore. Rhymes are elementary and have no substance to them. I'd say take this one back to the lab and dissect it and remake it.

Fiev.
 
ouch

ok we admit covenant is badly edited cause we never "mastered" it or w.e. u music people call it. but the upcoming is no more elementary than half the shit on the radio so don't say that. "From the windows, to the wall, till the sweat drop down my balls". Cmon ...
 
I'll have to agree with Fieva on this one homie.

Btw

Lyrics are only 25% of it.
 
Yes there is elementary all over the radio. But like Mindset said, it's only 25% of it.

I just think you could have come better than that though...I still think it sounds like K-Fed ghostwrote it. I say that because I've actually (gasp) listened to his album that didn't sell hardly shit. Lyrically, it sounds similar to that album. I'm sure you have higher aspirations than him on the mic....now as far as golddigging....he's a jedi pimp on that.

Fiev.
 
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