Dixie Funk - Any comments for improvement appreciated

[AllmanJoy]

Hello everyone. I have been just starting to learn recording. I jam alone most of the time and use a looper to play along with. I recorded this with a single condenser mic located about 2 feet away from a Fender Deville Amp tamed down as much as I could contain the beast. It is sort of like recording live I guess since I cant separate out any of the tracks. So I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions on how to make it sound as good as possible given the situation.

Both of these tunes were recorded the same way.

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Thanks in advance.
Rick

 

[FoulPhil]

It's doesn't sound bad, but it gets old quick because it's just repetitive and there isn't anything really going on. Finish the song

 

[PoeticIntensity]

Yup... Sounds like a recorded mono guitar played to a canned beat. I'd be half-tempted to put some real drums to it.... Got a pretty solid groove down, now ya just gotta do something with it.

The guitar sound really wasn't too bad. Nothing irritating about it. Keep at it!

 

[onestu3]

This is exactly how I start writing all of my songs. You just need to start the next step, and the ten after that until you have a good song. This is your "A" part, find a "B" part and put them together, vocals and a good hook, bam money man.