Distant Planets - My first Electronica beat

[Phoenix5891]

I specialize in Hip Hop & R&b but here is my first Electronica beat

Distant Planets Lo Fi


Distant Planets Hi Fi


Distant Planets MP3

 

[Halion]

I can't hear what the vocals in the beginning are saying.
I think the kick is too big for the ambient-ish sound (which I like! but the kicks really jumps out).

Sound Design-wise, nice job Maybe add a little more variation?

 

[Phoenix5891]

It says C.P.R is bananas...

Someone told me the one of the keys to electronica is repetition

Thanks for the listening

 

[Phoenix5891]

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