DP75
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Robus
Well-known member
You might get more response if you stuck around to participate in the work of the clinic, including offering comments on tracks that others have posted.
VomitHatSteve
Hat STYLE. Not contents.
Huh... Did I miss some context, or did that seem kind of harsh?
I mean, yes, you will get more responses to your posts if you're post on other people's mixes too.
Anyway, the mix: Levels are pretty coherent. The sounds might be a little harsh for the tone of the song tho. I'm getting a minimalistic, old-school-nintento, using only sin, square, and saw waves vibe from it, but the melody is more of a sin waves thing than the saws you seem to be using.
I might also revisit the panning. The low end leans left, and the melody leans right. It gives it a wider stereo image, but it also unbalances it a little.
Honestly, something like this would probably even work in mono.
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Music Box
Member
Good song. The mix was OK on my cheap laptop.
easlern
Boredom artist
The mix seems pretty solid to me. I might bring down the left and right synths just a bit near the end. There's a point around 1:25 where this Legend of Zelda like patch comes in. What is it? It sounds really cool.