Current project. Thoughts?

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http://www.soundclick.com/util/getplayer.m3u?id=6790321&q=hi

Struggling with how to make this go somewhere. I have an idea for a bridge that changes keys (from an E C#m A B F#m space to a D, G, A kind of place for a little while then back by way of an F#m - G - D - A rising kind of thing to B7 and then back into the E major stuff) but it seems to mess with the vibe. But if I don't do something it just seems to sit where it is.

Recording and performance are so-so, just my son and I messing around working on the idea. His guitar lead, my everything else.

Appreciate any comments,
J
 
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Move this post to the songwriting forum. You'll get lots of help there. You can even leave in the link to the song.
 
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