CROWDED, LATEST SONG with METAL FOUNDRY!

[Shredinger]

hey this is almost done but i wanted to get some feedback
there are some timing issues and strucutre
but how is it on ur speakers??

 

[MentaL]

Sadly mate it says access denied.

 

[Shredinger]

wow that is weird?? i just tried it and it worked!
which country are u in?

 

[Shredinger]

http://www.myspace.com/breakingsymmetry

i just put in my myspace~!
its called CROWDED
happy listening

 

[PoeticIntensity]

Sorry. First link gave "access denied", 2nd link - I couldn't find any song called "Crowded" on the myspace page.

 

[FoulPhil]

It sounds pretty good man, but it's got some clicks and pops at the begining. Sounds like it's from cutting in and out of the guitars. Pretty heavy stuff, but sounds off time on some parts.

 

[Shredinger]

thx! ok ill look into the clicks and pops
as for the timing yea i noticed it after i havent had the time to fix them yet but i see em

 

[Shredinger]

its called CROWDEAD but tis close enough lol

 

[Kjv1993]

i like it, but try maybe to add more 'flavor' to it if thats the word

 

[Shredinger]

do you mean in terms of musicality or in terms of sound/tone?? or extra parts/strucutre?

 

[Shredinger]

im gonna add a whole solo and shorten the outro and add a longer chord progression and more drum fills maybe a key/time change?

 

[Greg_L]

If you're gonna do this chuggy metal you gotta do it way tighter than this. This is kind of sloppy. The guitar tones lack air and the riffs are pretty generic.