heya fellow strat user- good song, it's kind of a bare bones production, so there's not much i can offer in the way of a critique. A few thoughts though- it was kind of long-if you cut down the intro and the between verses stuff you could economize it a bit without losing the feel of the song. As far as the recording (since that is the purpose of the clinic)-sounded like there was an audible hiss through the entire song-almost like it was recorded on a cassete 4 track. I'm listening in a bad environment so it may be on my end but i don't think so...The performance was good all around, the singing and playing were definetely adequete-there's a lot of room for production ideas-musical hooks, use of dynamics etc. I'd like to hear this as a more finished product(unless this is the final destination for this)-in which case it stands pretty good on its own.