Critque of my first recording?

[guitarguy101]

My band and I just finished this first recording in our basic little studio. Currently, we're using a Bowers and Wilkins Zeppelin Air as a monitor, a Tascam US 600 intercface, 2 shure sm-57 mics, and a makeshift windscreen I crafted from an old speaker cover.
Thoughts?

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