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Bloodbought

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thanx fellaz. i feel yall on the notations, and they WILL be corrected as soon as yall help me get my studio up and runnin. gotz to get out from under my present position. Yo, i really wanted yall to here this cut , "Jesus, You Saved Me", if yall could. It was the original post but got replaced my the one u heard. its all good cuz i was eventually gettin that one up too. thanx again homies. Peace.

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This is a very tight track here. The vocals are very strong on this. Beat is tight as well, especially the horns and drum programming. Not too big on the synth sound in the hook though. Overall, very nice feel to this, nice work.

"Whole World In His Hands" is a good idea, but didn't Trick Daddy just do this like last year? Sounds like the same exact beat? Either way, the flowing sounds tight, but maybe a little low. I'm having a hard time understanding him.

You do some nice work.

Stray
 
What up BLOOD?

Ya got something going... The ideas are there no doubt... What i'm hearing still is a few things in the mixing that you'll eventually work out. I listened a minute ago so I can't pick anything out that i'd do different. The performance is strong with the vocals but they just sound kinda thin compared to the music. I'd say it's the microphone setup and not the mix if I had to guess.

You did a good on the programming and trhe vocal performance. Lock in on the mixing and you got something. That is you singing right?...

You on the hook and K9 spitting verses sounds like a nice combo...
 
LAZI said:
What up BLOOD?

What?

What up CUZ?

I think the beat sounds a little bare and I'm not really into the synthes.

But, although a little low I like the vocals - everything is on point.

Good work. The beat is aight just not quite there IMO.
 
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