critique this song please

[daveskey_69]

hi there...am in a band in the uk called Elijah Grew
www.geocities.com/elijahgrew
this is a home demo i did of our song called Flowers In The Rain...recorded on a fostex Mr-8 with a pretty cheap mic, and a drum machine...didnt spend too long mastering it, but i think it sounds ok....would appreciate some feedback, as we are planning on doing some home recording to get a demo together.....the song can be found here
http://www.musicianmp3.com/search_details.cfm?adinfoid=2763

Thanx in advance........dave

 

[hybridsound]

The music sounds really good. The vocals could be a little less up front. I enjoyed the police siren. It reminded me a lot of Bob Dylan. Good song.

 

[daveskey_69]

thanx

thanx for the response......keep em' coming

 

[kjam22]

I liked the song. I think the vocal level was where it should be for this style. I'm a Dylan fan too. Nice chord progression. Good tempo and flow. Very listenable.

Didn't much care for some of the guitar work. Add a b3 and a harmonica on there.... and you got it.

Nice job!