Hi all,
Newbie to the forums, but have been writing for about 25 years. I don't normally care too much about presenting my lyrics because they are almost always a bit dense, and a little hard to decipher for those looking for a "story." This one is a little more direct however, and I thought I'd get your opinions. The mp3 is at ... it may pull the whole thing together a bit for you.
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COMING BACK
Here's what we thought you ought to say
you're giving golden coins away
that's all you needed from this place
(till you're coming back again)
we're still remembering your face
(till you're coming back again)
here's what we think you ought to know
the sun is swimming on the snow
that's what you wanted us to see
(are you coming back again?)
we have no other way to be
(are you coming back again?)
Newbie to the forums, but have been writing for about 25 years. I don't normally care too much about presenting my lyrics because they are almost always a bit dense, and a little hard to decipher for those looking for a "story." This one is a little more direct however, and I thought I'd get your opinions. The mp3 is at ... it may pull the whole thing together a bit for you.
--
COMING BACK
Here's what we thought you ought to say
you're giving golden coins away
that's all you needed from this place
(till you're coming back again)
we're still remembering your face
(till you're coming back again)
here's what we think you ought to know
the sun is swimming on the snow
that's what you wanted us to see
(are you coming back again?)
we have no other way to be
(are you coming back again?)