Critique mt tracks.......

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im feeling
"on the fly"

and

Mama - Jay Electronica
in fact that beat is my fav. outa the two
i could write up a nice rhyme for that

"on the fly"
i think has that weird bell, synth sound fade back and forth to often
thats the only thing i would look into changing around

peace
LB
 
All night- Got some wierd detuning thing going on the guitar. Whatn't for that it'd sound pretty cool.

Club Joint- Some detuned thing I think. Does more come in? Sounds like that's just a build up to something bigger. Good sounds though.

Did you off pitch these songs before you out em on the net or something? Shits making my want a beer bad as hell...

Mamma- Very interesting... Leaves things open for some creativity. Digging it.

Alright. No offense but the off pitching stuff is wack...

Meant To Be- sounds like it's probably a good R&B/ moody rap track. Nice bass work for real.

That's it though... My rides wreck'd so I gotta call my cuz to run me to the store for a 6 pack. The of pitched sound is making me fell drunk. Might as well be...:D

Keep up the good work. Peace.
 
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