critique childish sounding song/mix

  • Thread starter Thread starter BRIEFCASEMANX
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haha wow ... definitely not one of the better songs ive heard on here in terms of playing or song writing. play a fucking chord!! that shit sounds annoying...now that ive gotten that outta the way

in terms of the mix, drums sound pretty weak in my opinion, especially the snare. possibly the fact that theres no kick is contributing to this? thats all ive got for ya
 
any suggestions for making the snare sound better?


I CAN UNDERSTAND IF THIS IS TOO UNDERGROUND FOR YOU ALL. IT USES THE C-FUCK**IN MAJOR SCALE. IT IS A DARK SCALE. THE DRUMMER ONLY USES 2 CYMBALS AND A SNARE DRUM-THAT'S HOW FUCK**IN UNDERGROUND THIS SHIT** IS!
 
Yeah, pretty underground. But interesting in a "sneering performance art" kind of way. Snare might have more definition if the cymbals were a little less prominent, also if the keyboard and guitar (is it a guitar?) weren't quite so bright.

Tim
 
The C-scale... DAMN.. you dark bro! MAN THIS BOARD GOIN' UNDERGROUND AND SHi*T!!

I think your synth is too loud and also bright like Tim said. It think it kind of buries the vocals and just takes over the song too much. Also I think the song could use a lot more bass to fill it up the sound field. It just sounds too thin right now. Maybe try raising, doubletracking, reverbing, EQing the drums or something to fatten them up some.
Crazy sounding song :cool:
 
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