Sounds good. I like the voice. I like the song. I like the performance. The most obvious thing here is the bass in stereo - I'd like to hear it more up the middle.
I can easily imagine this on the radio.
Dude, I tried listening to you song, but in my PC it says that the file is corrupted. Can u send another link?
Hey dude, it worked now, I'm sorry, I probably did something wrong when I first downloaded it.
Anyway, its a really nice idea and a good song. There are some things I would do if I were you...bring the drums and bass a little bit down, maybe compress them a bit, but maybe your intention was to achieve this kind of more heavy sound.
Would like to know how you achieve the vocals sound. Did you put any saturation on it?
Overall, this is a good demo. The song has a good structure, voice is good, strong and confident.
Listen to what Talisman ^^ said above. There is scope for exanding on the musical story.
Funny thing, when I click on the link and tell it to play, all that came through was a loud hash. When I hit download, the song plays just fine. Weird!
The vocals are GOOD! Your voice reminds me a bit of Chris Daughtry. I might work a bit on the solo break. It doesn't seem to fit with the mood of the song, and there are a couple of places where it misses the beat. You might also try adding something like an acoustic guitar to the background rhythm track. Somethings it just gives a bit of fullness to the track, if you don't want the sound to be too sparse. Sometimes it works, sometimes it doesn't, but its something I do.
Good song, it just needs a few touches.
Overall, this is a good demo. The song has a good structure, voice is good, strong and confident.
Listen to what Talisman ^^ said above. There is scope for exanding on the musical story.
Atkron, I'm guessing that you used the pickup option on your acoustic. Not sure what guitar it is, but it sounded more "electric" rather than acoustic.