I agree with what was said above.
Plus the cymbals sound WAAAAY too harsh. I couldn't finish the song, because it was hurting my ears.
I do like the sounds from the guitar and the drums are decent (exept for the cymbals), but the other thing that stood out was that the song felt unballanced from left to right. Now I'm not saying that for every guitar on the left that you need a guitar on the right, but if you have a guitar on the left, there should be something to ballance it. (the song to me felt right heavy)