Contemporary metal tune

[xfinsterx]

Just lookin for a few opinions.
Thanks folks.

 

[ender4trackmind]

It kicks...maybe a extra bass dub that plays around with octaves a bit to make it even thicker, with guitars perhaps do some harsh full downstroke rhythms ( like the change at 2mins ). Just honestly thats subjective " oh you could do this crap ".

Once again kick track...great vocals and so on. lol I know you had to plot and plan your ass off to get it down

http://www.nowhereradio.com/artists/album.php?aid=4453&alid=-1

Shameless of me...you might dig " shotgun " hahaha and if you wanted feel free to toss some words my way on " Tunnel Vision "...never have any luck with feedback

 

[Dogman]

Cool. Very harsh vocals. Did that hurt? You got those in the mix pretty well. I agree, if you could thicken the guitars, but way cool tune. Change at 2:00 is cool. More of that!!! Man , that makes my throat hurt. Gotta give it a try.

Keep it up. Cool tune.
Ed

 

[Dogman]

Shameless of me...you might dig " shotgun " hahaha and if you wanted feel free to toss some words my way on " Tunnel Vision "...never have any luck with feedback [/QUOTE]

Shotgun..Cool tones. I like the chugging rythum.

Tunnel Vision sounds cool. Sounds like something from a game soundtrack. Kinda cool, industrial in spots. Nice.

I liked these 2 tunes. Get some lyrics in there. You've got a good start, keep going.
Ed

 

[cellardweller]

$ .02

xfinsterx

Is this you/your band, or are you recording someone else?
I like the song. It doesn't seem that the "clean" vocal is meshing well with the scream/growl (@ 1:38/etc.).

That's contemporary?
Yea, I guess it is...lol!

I feel sorry for this guy when/if he tours...WOW!
Damn that's gotta hurt!

Cool song, sounds good to me FWIW.

 

[xfinsterx]

xfinsterx

Is this you/your band, or are you recording someone else?
I like the song. It doesn't seem that the "clean" vocal is meshing well with the scream/growl (@ 1:38/etc.).

That's contemporary?
Yea, I guess it is...lol!

I feel sorry for this guy when/if he tours...WOW!
Damn that's gotta hurt!

Cool song, sounds good to me FWIW.

Its just aband i tracked Celler.
They didnt have a chorus for the song, so i I did the screams and singing for those 3 parts of the song.
Theyre all 16 and 17 year olds too, pretty good for youngins huh?
It feels good to work with people like that for similarity reasons.
Ive been engineering for 2 years, and theyve been playing for 2 years.
It works out in the end.

Peace Cellardwellar.

 

[xfinsterx]

Cool. Very harsh vocals. Did that hurt? You got those in the mix pretty well. I agree, if you could thicken the guitars, but way cool tune. Change at 2:00 is cool. More of that!!! Man , that makes my throat hurt. Gotta give it a try.

Keep it up. Cool tune.
Ed

Right on Dog man.
Thanks for the review bro.