Comments on lyrics wanted

[Strat Man]

For the Love of All

Gold runs through her veins, blank cheques from very good friends
Diluted in her mistakes, clear in writing, silent in speech, amicable with face
Without lies in the crevice of her cake, mauve, black and tan, colours of a racial catastrophe

She cries tears of silver, spits wine from her lips, sips champagne in the interval
She spells righteousness with her fist, curled wide open for revenge
She dreams of platinum in her hair, bronze at her feet, all others cold in cement filled boxes

And yet, daringly slow, she claws her way through crowds to surpass the unachievable
Deluge of plastic running up and over her

Glossed in appearance, false in pretence, spilt over in by products of her metal delusion
She stands, for the love of all, enamoured in a sealed black bag.

 

[greenie]

Gotta say got no clue what genre this might be, what it means.
Looks like an artsy poem to me. Or a riddle.

 

[Tasty Eraser]

It reads like it should be sung over a metal tune (no pun intended).

Is this about the chick from the movie "The Matrix"?

 

[JoeBannon]

What genre? Looks metal.

 

[ethos]

I could be completey wrong, but after reading it a few times, I started to think you may have been talking about Lady Liberty.
I liked this a lot though. I've always liked songs that require you to look deeper than the surface. so right or wrong, I liked this. Written well.