What an absolutely awesome recording! I was also
very happy to find that it was recorded at 96k 24 which
makes an excellent statement for the higher resolution
recording.
great arrangement, and I like the vocal stlye. If I was
just listening just as a music fan I would not change a thing.
But

from a engineering standpoint, and I had to listen
a couple of times for this...the drums at the beginning were
ever so slightly off.....when everything else joins in it is not
detectable at all.
I can understand what you were trying to do with guitar
but I dont think it needed a hard left and right pan. Im
not listening to it on headphones but I can tell that it
would be distracting and this recording doesnt need that
kind of distraction. Maybe a 10 oclock 2 oclock pan with
a touch of reverb on the left channel. On another listen,
the guitar in the left channel could probably use a low pass
filter maybe try at 15k because I "feel "the brightness
in that channel causing it to stick out too much. This would
definitely be a digital recording type effect because digital can
capture the higher frequencies whereas analog tape could not.
You may find that it actually becomes smoother when you roll it
down some.
Just noticed that all of high frequency stuff is panned to the
left...you could move the high hat to the right side..to give
the mix some balance..rolling off the high highs might still be the
thing to do ...
Just somethings to consider...if you didnt change a thing
I think you would be just fine..
Great work!!!!