Comment On Our First Song From The Studio

[14yearoldkid]

hey i posted this in the mp3 mixing forum and got a lot of good advice on the sounds but i wanna know hows the songwriting?? any comments i would love! thanks
bryan

 

[Nicole_Rose]

hey i posted this in the mp3 mixing forum and got a lot of good advice on the sounds but i wanna know hows the songwriting?? any comments i would love! thanks
bryan

the link you gave doesn't work.

 

[Jahn]

the link you gave doesn't work.

yep - could you just cut and paste your lyrics?

 

[14yearoldkid]

Oops

o man i forgot to put the link in! hahaha this is it

www.myspace.com/manhattanprojectband sorry about that!!!

 

[Nicole_Rose]

good tune

 

[Jahn]

very cool! are you going to add the lyrics to your myspace as well?