Come on people. Do I have to beg??

[dobro]

I listened to Tov Lehodos - the vocal's too loud, and there might be a bit of an intonation issue on a couple notes that you bend up or down to, but it's essentially respectable Jewish pop. I like the sound of your voice, the layering of the vocals, and that's the strong point of the song. I'd like to hear what you do when you get tired of sounding musically respectable and start to experiment with the music, slow down get reflective and a single voice is up and out front and getting heard. Good to hear your stuff finally.

 

[LI Slim]

Begging would be nice, but...

.... I just want to add, from a songwriting perspective, that you seem to have a good instinct for melody and song structure.