come and rate my verse

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is it sick enough for the industry

  • sick

    Votes: 3 50.0%

  • not sick

    Votes: 3 50.0%
  • Total voters
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i got a 12 gage pump to yo face point blank when i let out my rage/
is tha anotomy of disfiguring faces ima racist mutha fucka wit an army knife on my waist/the art of dien cut your fuckin head open and give you a taste for even thinkin of tryin/stick an axe in a bitch's cut and watch her start bleedin and cryin/leavn you blinded welcome to my temple of doom the cannibal goon/welcome to my realm of melotic torture where i mold your rotten body into a rotten sculpter/ima demon possesd hell raising spine crackin pussy raping fuckin soldier/is over wit a bottle of hennesy and my
m-16 at a home invasion i blast at the nation and turn it in to a presidential assasination/i paint pictures in your head beyond your imagination and i wont stop till i reach the stage of bone disintigration......................
 
Hmmm someone's a little grumpy today :D

I liked it but what (rap style) are you doing it in?

I can hear it in a real mad fast rap.
 
Perhaps Marie Osmond might cover this as she tries for a comeback?
 
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thanks for the props.please people keep it comin with the ratings.im trien to see if i need more work on my flows before i drop some tracks.ima drop another poll pretty soon be sure to check that out....
 
Terrible. honestly, try to do something with a little meaning maybe.
This sounds like everyone who wants to make it into "the industry".
nothing creative or new about it.
Im not trying to be an asshole, but if I were to tell you this was good, i wouldnt be helping. cuz this isnt good.

and blah at deadprez.
 
^I use to listen to "Lets get free" all the time. Now, however, I think theyre mostly hype. Just because they talk about revolution dosn't mean theyre good.

meh, Just one mans opinion though.
I will agree that theyre better than anything on the radio. but thats not saying much.
 
ethos said:
^I use to listen to "Lets get free" all the time. Now, however, I think theyre mostly hype. Just because they talk about revolution dosn't mean theyre good.

meh, Just one mans opinion though.
I will agree that theyre better than anything on the radio. but thats not saying much.
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Okay...We agree on all points.. Glad we cleared that up... :)
 
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