((( Chop Shop Productions ))) - 3 More for Dat Azz..

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Dawg! Those are nice beats you have there... The kick's are really tight! I feel'em hittin' my chest, 'yamsenn (Contracted for of "You know what I'm sayin'!")

BUT! BUT, but, but but but but... Where's the bass? I can really hear a really agressive bass on those two new beats (Not on the remix...)... By aggressive I mean long and loud...

Keep bangin' bro,
Beathoven
http://www.nowhereradio.com/beathoven/singles

(P.S.: Do you have MSN messenger man? I already have Attilah on my list... It's fun to talk with other producers... If yes, just PM me your username...)
 
Good stuff. U using an MPC?

9 eleven- the revisions sound good. The melody still doesn't sound sad

BK- could use a bassline

Hill - was OK, i didn't feel it too much, i think it was the stabbing strings. Try using a long wah clavi instead A4, F4, E4

Holla


P.S. no one uses AIM??? well I guess i could get MSN


Ok my MSN name is - labratmusic
 
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I luv this forum.....

The fact that you cats let me borrow you ears and help me hear things I don't.....

B_oven

Good point on the bassline for the BK protocol track I will formulate something for it....


Hi D

Thanks for the advice on the strings... sometimes I do that too much... I will try some different ish.....


Thanks again
Gents
 
Diggy,
Here's the scoop:

1)9/11-like the bassline,drums,overall tighter than first version

2)Hill-like the drums,violins....think the piano is too far upfront a little(if it was me....I'd try to put the piano back and make a bassline with the same melody as the piano....just me)

3)BK Protocol-liked the drums,especially the snare,liked the guitar,
not really feelin' the stabs though,I'd do the same with the guitar and bassline as I said in the Hill,just to see how it sounds...just me!

overall good job son.......keep choppin'


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nice beats

I was feeling bk protocol the most. Like the guitar and how you chopped it up. Nice shit. But I hear no bassline. The hill was good too. Like that piano. But I also hear no bassline in that one. Like beathoven said, it needs some long agressive bassline. And 9/11 is tyte but it doesn't sound that sad.
 
WHHHHAAAATTTTTT

Man The Hill is tight. I wouldn't change a thing on that beat!!!!! You will find that the Dark Aggressive rapper will tear that up!
Keep makin lines like this and you will have no problem selling.

lil
 
Thanks for the detailed comments.... I tend to agreee with the bassline comments.... and the stabs might be over used I don't know... But as usual thanks gents....


Rat Diggy ...
 
What up Rat dog.

I'm digging the rmix of 9/11. I feeling it's got more depth than the original.

Bk needs bass. It's alright though. I just think the bass would set it off.

The Hill. Hhmmm... The sounds are just sounding real rough and random. It sounds like something is missing also. Needs some more sounds in it I think. Maybe a change up the strings notes some.

Keep em banging doc. Peace.
 
Thanks for the advice and for taking the time...

Raticus
 
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