sole,
liked the song and melody, but your ending bridge
I know you did me wrong
But with out you without you
I can't breath
I know its just a song
But baby, you got to leave you got to leave
The harmonizing on the word I know & breath is awful, sorry
Maybe change it to
Girl (like you did I know) you did me wrong
But with out you with out you
I can't go on....for...( I can't breath)...............and keep the same harmony that you did with the word wrong
I know its just a song
But girl, I can't hold on. I can't hold on
Anyway, if you have trouble with the melody on the lyrics sned me an e-mail.