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AvalancheFlows

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Yo what up the names Avalanche or Ava...

Check out my music and let me know what ya think

www.myspace.com/avalanche2005

Also, if your down to collab and drop some good music then get at me on aim or up on here.
 
thanx

thanx fo peeping the tracks

i see you fuck with that vtz,yeaaahhhhhh!
right now i'm building a new set up
but after that get at me on the collab tip
ONLY IF YOU SERIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
also i give conseltation on writting if you need it
get at me,,,peep my tracks,,i'l peep yours
fuck wit me,,,fo real

peace
 
yo yeah man VTZ is where it's at.

I mean I am down to collab. I'm using pro tools. So I don't know how you wanna get down, but get at me.
 
has anyone else checked this and can give me some feedback?
 
im peepin u out now (please return the favor) . . . myspace.com/breadwinnaz


i checked the first two - lyrics not the problem really, its more of the delivery . . . not even the flow . . . u kinda start out ok then some of the lines just dont fall right . . theyre on time . . but just not precise . . .

the vocals is ahite, ya style is reflective i guess . . . a lil too emotional on the 1st 2 - but on my dream - u got real good wordplay in the first verse! adn the second verse . . the "o-aine" rhyme scheme is tite . .. i would re-record them joints for more feelin . . .

but "i thought i should" got a harda edge to it . . but the flow there too is kinda . . . that same on time but not fallin right . . . for instance in the hook - when u "hold over" the thooooought its almost like a non-intentional stammer . . . if it sounded more exaggerated it would sound like u mean to do it . . .here it sounds like ur doin it n not knowin it . . .

i hope my remarks aitn offensive or too confusin to catch what i mean . . . IM NOT DISSIN (thats fa sho!)
 
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