Check out this song... :S

[wx3]

First of all I would just like to say that this was recorded using limited equipment, and my buddy isnt the best singer or guitarist in the world. Also, at the beginning there is a bit of wind from his vocals just because I don't have a proper pop screen right now.

Here's the link to there page:

http://apathy-x.filetap.com

On the first page click enter then click CLICK HERE to hear a rough cut of the studio CD version of forgotten...

'Studio CD VERSION' lol more like half assed homerecording done in my living room

Oh well, tell me what you guys think.

Thanks

 

[buckshot plevna]

I feel bad when nobody replies to these, and I hate when nobody replies to my posts so I'll place my thoughts....

alright I'm listening to the intro, sounds not too bad, your chorus effect is a little heavy...it's a little distracting...okay the guitar has started strumming, the time has lost what it was before..the riff at the start sounds slower than the rest of the song, that might need some attention...another thing...the guitar is out of tune! It's one of the lower three strings (maybe the d or the a) that really stands out to me...the vocals aren't clear at all...I have no idea what you're saying, even at the chorus where it's doubled up...

I think it's actually not a bad song but from a studio perspective, it needs A LOT of work, keep trying! Really when you do everything yourself, everything is trail and error, some stuff might work, some stuff won't...keep at it


BP