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Alteezza
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Listening now. Good use of you vocal range. Good into. Great concept. The rainbow changes. But really. Even the people who you think will make it through heaven and hell will find out that their spouse is screwing the mailman. That is a change that opposes most people's vows. Too bad songs like this don't explain how people feel about each other for the rest of their lifes. Wait it does. It explains how people feel aout each other whenever they put everything else beside and feel that the person they congegate with each days is very special. Great recording.
just curoius....what is you definition of pop? I always thought of it as a definition of "popular" which is what it technically is called. I don't know how popular this song is with the people you collaberate with or at this site ot any other but I feel that you should find a better title of genre. But, NEways tell me what the modern definition of POP is because I might be mistaken as I always am. However the song is very catchy and I am one who hates modern music for certain reasons. I think you did a superb job in writing/singing/recording.
just curoius....what is you definition of pop? I always thought of it as a definition of "popular" which is what it technically is called. I don't know how popular this song is with the people you collaberate with or at this site ot any other but I feel that you should find a better title of genre. But, NEways tell me what the modern definition of POP is because I might be mistaken as I always am. However the song is very catchy and I am one who hates modern music for certain reasons. I think you did a superb job in writing/singing/recording.
grn
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everything is good - arrangement, recording, etc. I would work on vocal a bit more... for it to be really "pop"... the arrangement is fine, just the delivery... you're on pitch, which is good. I would ... smooth it out and make it stronger/more confident. it's difficult to explain. when you sing "change", it's like chay-ange... instead of cha-ange, a definite, immediate drop. it's more like you're sliding around rather than going directly to the note.
everything is good - arrangement, recording, etc. I would work on vocal a bit more... for it to be really "pop"... the arrangement is fine, just the delivery... you're on pitch, which is good. I would ... smooth it out and make it stronger/more confident. it's difficult to explain. when you sing "change", it's like chay-ange... instead of cha-ange, a definite, immediate drop. it's more like you're sliding around rather than going directly to the note.
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Alteezza
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What is your explanation of "pop" grn? Just wandering. I'm ignorant
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yorgo
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wow. some of the best constructive critism I have found yet!thank you.
Grn. You're right about the vocal. I'm really not a vocalist. I try to do my best and I think I get average at best results. I sometimes do things like the "change" thing to hit the note or get the right tone from my voice. I wish I could attack but its going to take more confidence practice.
As far as "pop" goes, I guess today's equiv is AAA. Not too heavy not too soft etc....
Lyrically, I didn't write it. I'd have to ask my good friend, which I just may. The lyrics were handed to me to see what I could come up with, and what you heard was the result.
Thanks for taking the time to listen and respond.
Grn. You're right about the vocal. I'm really not a vocalist. I try to do my best and I think I get average at best results. I sometimes do things like the "change" thing to hit the note or get the right tone from my voice. I wish I could attack but its going to take more confidence practice.
As far as "pop" goes, I guess today's equiv is AAA. Not too heavy not too soft etc....
Lyrically, I didn't write it. I'd have to ask my good friend, which I just may. The lyrics were handed to me to see what I could come up with, and what you heard was the result.
Thanks for taking the time to listen and respond.
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Rockerbob
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Sounds good. It did seem to lack some passion, but overall it very nice.