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....or something..... :p

So anyway, I re-did the guitars and vocals on this. This is another that some of you have already heard. Based on comments from other recent tunes, my guitars sounded a bit compressed or lacking some bite. So let me know if this is any better.

It shoudl be the first tune to play as soon as you go to the page, but sometimes the player mixes up the tunes, so make sure you're listening to "Mundane Monday". Thanx.
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RAMI (mundane monday)
 
Again very sweet.

This song sounded abit more dirty than before, In a good way.
Kinda like "Deep Purple" dirty.

The guitar sounds great, maybe a little taming in the top, trebble that is.
On second thought, No leave it like it is. I love it :)

I think the solo was great, I heard bits and pieces that were rough, but thats what brings out the soul in it, it sounds as If your playing solo`s like the guy in Free Paul Kossov, leaning your back into a huge Marshall wall :)
Best guitar work I`ve ever heard you do :cool: ....

I knew you were abetter drummer than me, but guitar :mad: :mad: come on :D :D

seriously great axework.

And last the vox has got another dimension to them, you sound more secure, and Like your really enjoying it.
Great clarity, and detail.

Another Bullseye, Rami.


congrats mate.
 
cool tune... I think the vocal on the chorus "I don't like what I see..." might be a little loud, and thr 2nd verse vocal might be a little too quiet. Overall a good mix... good singing, too.
 
RAMI said:
....or something..... :p

So anyway, I re-did the guitars and vocals on this. This is another that some of you have already heard. Based on comments from other recent tunes, my guitars sounded a bit compressed or lacking some bite. So let me know if this is any better.

It shoudl be the first tune to play as soon as you go to the page, but sometimes the player mixes up the tunes, so make sure you're listening to "Mundane Monday". Thanx.
While you're there, sign my guestbook or start a thread in the forum... :cool:
RAMI (mundane monday)
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Hey RAMSTER,

The guitars sound great to me, I would probably give them a boost ever so slightly, in volume by 1 db, :) , especially during the solo..But that may bring them out too much.

Another fine tune, I can't get passed "Dirty Water"........I love the riff!

I may go over to your site now and interfere with some stuff! :D :D



Gorty :)
 
Thanx alot guys. Nak, I thought the guits might have a bit too much highs too, but if you think they're cool, I'll leave them like that for now.

Sleeper, I noticed that, too about the first line of the chorus. I thought it was just my imagination because the back vocals come in there, but you confirmed it. I'll re-mix it.
 
Hey Gorty...we posted at the same time...I think bringing up te guits might bury the vox too much...But I think I need to bring up the vox slightly in the verses, so maybe I'll try bringing up the guitars then.................


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your new guitar tone(s) really improved your recordings alot. nice site man. that dirty strat tone on "dirty" is pretty cool.
 
Hi RAMI!! I like your new song Mundane

I like your lead. Your guitar skill is really developing.

I like your lead part.

This is an easy going song.

Drumming of course is right on.

True :)



Dirty Water started playing and I couldn't stop listening....man that one rocks the house....I think you found your sig sound in this song RAMI...it kicks!!!

You have taken this song in a harder direction, than you usually do. I like that about it! I like dirty guitar tones....along with the clean ones. You show off how your guitar skills have grown immensely.

Your vocals really stand out in this one. You are in a different tone, than usual. Are ya singing an octave lower? It compliments your voice. :)

I like your little break of slow melodic singing going into the scream..I love that freaking scream!!! You scream so freaking good!! Then ya do it again!! Kick ass scream!!! :D I love it !! :D :D :D :cool:

I know I am off on the wrong song.....but ya shouldn't have your player going then!! :p

True :) :) :)
 
Mundane Monday.....how sweet it is...... :D

Very cool tune man..and you've improved it some. This is a very punchy mix...I like it. Drums have good depth, and that guitar tone fits well. Nice sound on the vox...seems to have more depth also. And I love the bass tone. The chorus part that is "On my own again", that is really cool. Nice layering there.

Cool tuneage man.... :cool:
 
RAMI,
Nicely done all around. The guitars are ace - the tones & sounds are well selected and match the playing style well.
Really well recorded &, on top of all of that, it's a really, really good song.
 
I heard this one before. I love it!
If I have to be picky then I have nothing to post. I’m sorry I didn’t post before but I’m visiting this great forum mostly when I’m at work and the stress and other factors there don’t give me much time to post my comments.
This style of music is similar to stuff I preferred to perform a many years ago with my band.
Well done, RAMI!
I’m downloading all your song now!
 
TravisinFlorida said:
your new guitar tone(s) really improved your recordings alot. nice site man. that dirty strat tone on "dirty" is pretty cool.
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btw rami, what i meant was that your recordings sounded pretty damn good before but your new guitar tone really added some dynamics and color to the overall sound of your tunes. i liked hearing you being a little more experimental with your vocals too.
 
Thanx alot for all the comments, everyone.

Travis, no need to explain what you meant, I didn't take it the wrong way. I'm glad it's sounding better with each recording ( i hope)

True, I'm glad you like "Dirty Water" so much. Makes me feel good to know that I have one that moves you so much.

Sikter...thanx alot for the nice words. Nice to see you around again.

Dogman and Ray....I miss you guys at my site. Need you to come cause some trouble over there.
 
I really like the sound of those vocals on Mundane Monday. They have a certain smooth sound to them that I just think is great. The vocal performance is right on the money also.

Everything else sounds really good - guitars, bass, drums and backups.

That acapella at the end is great - the effects are really cool ! :cool: :cool:

Your mixes were great before, but I think now they have stepped up to another level. Good One!

:D
 
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