check out my new beat about family

  • Thread starter Thread starter LiquidBronze
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hey, my only suggestion is that you need to bring your music volumes up on your rap, because to me it seems like your vocals drown out your beat, its like the beat is not there, nice little beat going on. ryme is nice jstget it to blend better.
new here myself so welcome.
these are only my thoughts, not an expert but i like what i like peace
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hmmm i actually re-upped the song casue i thought the vocals were to low
any way thanks for listening
peace
LB
 
NO PROBLEM

hey no problem im new to this so i enjoy listen to oters stuff, growning time but yeahita like i fouced so on your vocals that the beat faded out, like i sid its tight though do your damn thing boy:D :D :D :D
just know when i listen to a cut esp. reapp its usually the beat that grabs me and keeps me, then i really start to foucus in on the words. but this was the other way around. good luck wit all you do
peace
Ldy
 
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well thats actually cool you focused on the words
i would rather have people listen to my words then my beat
to me the words come first
then the beat
both are important dont get me wrong
but whats said is what makes people think more imho

others could think diffrent
its just my opinion

peace
LB
 
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LiquidBronze said:
well thats actually cool you focused on the words
i would rather have people listen to my words then my beat
to me the words come first
then the beat
both are important dont get me wrong
but whats said is what makes people think more imho

others could think diffrent
its just my opinion

peace
LB
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That's why I didn't give a damn when everyone said my first (and only) beat was shit.:D

Alright track.

The lyrics are well thought out.

Personally I'm not too keen on your flow (it's alright), but it's sounding a little monotonous like before (it was you that posted that example with the most swearing I've ever seen in a verse, wasn't it?) - don't get me wrong though, I'm very picky.

The beat is going kinda nicely - maybe something with a little more passion?

Overall, what I'm hearin' is pretty good.
 
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no i wasnt the one that made that swearing track
i rarely swear in my music

peace
LB
 
LB,

This is alright. The vocals are definitely too low, the track needs some compression to keep levels more consistent. I think the track is straight.

I would suggest changing the vocal arrangement. The rapping just goes for too long and doesn't change enough to hold attention. This is normally where hooks and/or bridges come in handy. They break up the monotony. I would say either add a hook or make some drastic changes in the beat every 45 seconds or so to keep things interesting.

BTW, What happened to your commercial break? I was interested in hearing your views on it.

Stray
 
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word
thanks for the comments stray
and yeah i know the vocals are to low
im actually in the process of changing the volumes now
and ill try adding some compression as well



i just wanted to get that up and get some comments to go further

i lost my damn cable as well
im using the free computers at my apartment complex for the time being
but it sux

have a good X-mas all
peace
LB
 
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