I've had a big fat listen to this track now, and I'm really enjoying it.
I like the quality of voices and their mixing. I like the sound of the guitar, djembe.
I think the levels are fine. I'm hearing a rich dynamic mix which is a pleasure to listen to.
I hear now that there is flute and fiddle, but I still mourn the lack of detail and crispness in their sound. For example, I would love to hear a bit of breath with the flute, and a bit of bow scrape with the fiddle.
On my system, I'm getting a bit of boominess in the bottom end. When I load it into Reaper, load up an EQ and pull a bit of 66 out, it sharpens it up it up nicely