Carry On

[VesuviusJay]

Hey folks,

Its been awhile since Ive posted. Ive been practicing. Here's a little tune calle Carry On Ive been working on. I think you guys will dig it...

Jay

PS if the attatchment is no good please click here:

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[groovejunkie]

that excessive use of that crash is annoying, especially when you're singing; anyway, that solo starting at 2:10 needs to be redone, and the vox melody needs also alternation.
anyway, I think the tune it's worth to work on it!

cheers

 

[TripleM]

I thought the singer has a nice expressive voice. Some of the guitar parts were nice. Watch the midrange on them, it got a little heavy up there.

I thought maybe some of those guitar licks got a little excessive. The one lead guit was a little thin and abrasive sounding. Just a little too much soloing going on I thought.

The vocals kind of overdrove the mic at about :46.

The kick drum sound I thought needed to be "big and thick" for a song like this. But the kick sound was pretty soft and subdued.

Doubled vocals would I think sound cool on this one.

I liked the ending.

 

[VesuviusJay]

Thanks guys! BTW I did double the vox on this one. I'm wondering if the second track was too low maybe? Also can you guys hear anything of mention about the room accoustics?

 

[participant]

Not a bad opening.... nice & full... kind of the infantry battle gtrs lined up, and the soldiers sling 'em low. Symphonic almost.

The vocs are low in your mix.... and your guits are robbing your low end... have you cut anything on 'em? Try rolling off the lows (cut all below around 150Hz)... that should allow your kick drum and bass guitar to solidify-- and with more level on vox, you'll get a better mix IMO.

I like your chord choices/tensions and the symphonic vibe.

A flavorful pallete of guitar tones... enjoyable... and improvable, IMO.


Chad