Can you tip me for a better mix of my comp

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Here it is https://soundcloud.com/blingui/vz-1
Could you plz tell me what's missing ? what should I do to make it sound better
thx !

You need to learn how to get control of your low end balances. This starts with your room, your monitoring, and good metering. Towards the end when the instruments build up, its gets very harsh and brittle. Total lack of definition and clarity in the drums.

The more I skipped through the song, the more I'm certain this is a monitoring and room problem. We could go on about a better use of time based effects, saturation, and EQ but I don't think it'll help anywhere near as much as getting your listening environment working properly.
 
I would say to you spend a long time building toward a part that is four minutes of so into the song . The intro is too exaggerated . It takes too long to get to where the beat will resolve . I like the parts toward the end . Shorten or condense the intro . And certain parts seem to need a bit more of the percussion forward .
 
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