Hmmm, I love the voice, my only concern is the "bass" try changing it to a more natural sounding bass, couse right now it sounds like a guitar player is playing with the jack end while it's plugged in to the amp, or if you DO want too keep that sound, try soloing it out, mic your monitors, record it, and use the "live" recorded version of it so that you get a bit more air in it, but other than that I like it.