can i get a witness?

[gullyjewelz]

I just want some feedback on the songs on my site. I have some instrumentals (mid way down towards the end) and several with rap vocals over them. Some recorded at home, some recorded at pseudo and "official" professional studios

the site

http://www.soundclick.com/gullyjewelz

holla

 

[Megaman]

u still wit me - Beat doesn't sound like it goes with the melody your rapping. Flute or whatever that is takes away from the words and fights with the lyrical space. But I like the song man. Flute my go better after your hook where there's no words or over the hook. But not over the verses


life on rap - This one flows! Beat goes with the melody. Got me bouncin' on this one. Just need to clean up the sound clips a bit so they don't sound like you put a mic up to your tv's speaker, but it did set the stage for the song.

That's all I listened to for now. I'll check out some others later

 

[Fieva]

checking now....will give you feedback when I get a good listen...could you check mine? the link in my sig should actually work now.

 

[Fieva]

on u still wit me.....take down the flutes just a notch like megaman said and up those vocals up a notch...almost like you wanna swap places in volume. Vocals are on point homie.

on come on mami...it seems the chorus is lacking something....seems that the verse are taking more hype...you might try to add another vocal to the chorus and add some effects to it, maybe eq and some delay? The beat is on point and vocals are tight.

I would remix some of the levels in life on rap and git ya drink on.

You may want to re-record fall back and surrounded completely. They sound like things you may have done when you first got started and I can see potential for these if you could get them with the same sound that the vocals on u still wit me had.


But I see some pre-banger work in these tracks homie. Good work.