Can anyone listen to this please?

[anoopbal]

Hi

Can you check this song and see what you think please:

 

[TheChikenMaster]

Vocals are all over the place, I suggest automating the vocal fader to an average a little lower than it is now. Cut some lows... I wouldn't compress it.

 

[anoopbal]

I think when I upload it to soundcloud, it just compress it a bit. I feel the premix got a bit more compressed than the vocals.

Do you mean lowering the vocals a bit lower?

Also why do you say don't compress it?

thanks a lot!

 

[TripleM]

I didn't get the feeling that the vocal levels were uneven. Just another opinion, but I don't think they need automation or compression.

I *do* think the vocal performance needs some work. The vocal tone and pitch are fine. I think you over-sung it though. Over done emotion. Go for another take and dial back "the feeling" just a bit.

Huge pop at 2:07. Another one at 2:22. I think there were some more earlier, but I didn't get a time markers. 3 or 4 more after 2:22 as well.

 

[anoopbal]

I didn't get the feeling that the vocal levels were uneven. Just another opinion, but I don't think they need automation or compression.

I *do* think the vocal performance needs some work. The vocal tone and pitch are fine. I think you over-sung it though. Over done emotion. Go for another take and dial back "the feeling" just a bit.

Huge pop at 2:07. Another one at 2:22. I think there were some more earlier, but I didn't get a time markers. 3 or 4 more after 2:22 as well.

Thanks a lot! You are right on the money!

Once I heard it on my headphones, I just felt I over did it. That was my first song in English. i will redo it.