Camel Ride

[EL34]

I wrote this tune about a year ago.
I am going to re-mix it now that I have better recording skills.

The melody is Arabian sounding and the drums reminded me of riding through the desert on a Camel. Two humps of course.

Comes complete with Camel belching effects.

Anywho, before I go back in to re-mix, I'm looking for some input.
Camel Ride
Thanks

 

[sikter]

Hello!
Try to do something with rhytm section. Drum and bass are way below guitars in quality scale.
Nice playing, cathy tune and if you replace that drum machine track with something better everything will sound much, much better.
Even some Eq on drum track will improve track. Ambient of the drum track is not "sahara".
Bass is difficult to hear but that much I hear is a little "tiny".
It does'n feel like it fits with drum.

Anyway I liked tune.