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sicko31298
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just looking for any final advise and/or opinions on the song...anything mixing wise i could do to help? and any advise on wat to do in the mastering process
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thepursuit
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Wow, pretty deep. It sounds great. The background feels like a lot of cut & paste... it sounds like its on purpose but maybe a little too choppy, it was hard to follow at the beginning.
I like the talk/singing in the chorus, it breaks up the song really well. The pads in the background really add a lot without being too weird.
My only other critique is maybe its a little compressed sounding. Maybe a little reverb on the voices too?
I like the talk/singing in the chorus, it breaks up the song really well. The pads in the background really add a lot without being too weird.
My only other critique is maybe its a little compressed sounding. Maybe a little reverb on the voices too?
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sicko31298
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k thanks...what do you mean by hard to follow at begining.. n what do you mean sounds like cut n paste in backroiund.. n ill try takin out some compression...
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Tobe
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I’m no expert. Is there some point to counter the vocal with a passive “chill” backing track?
The vocal makes me want to listen... the backing track is a bit drab (but maybe that's why the vocal works).
The vocal makes me want to listen... the backing track is a bit drab (but maybe that's why the vocal works).
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sicko31298
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ok here it is with a lil less compession and a lil reverb on the vocals... and not to sure what your tryin to say tobe.. if you can explain that a lil better im listening...ill try anything if its goin to help. i know its so close
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thepursuit
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I'm not 100% sure.... its a feeling thing I guess. It feels like its a bunch of separate samples cut and pasted together instead of one song flowing together. Once the singing comes in over it it flows a lot better so I'm mainly just talking about the intro part. great song though I've listened to it a bunch of times since i've downloaded it
karumba
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i've heard only the first version. i really like the song & it sounds good. nice production.
but: the vocal sounds really detached. it needs to be mixed better, its sound too hard & edgy. it sounds the playback was mixed by someone else & the vocals are just raw + leveled to somehow match the playback.
but: the vocal sounds really detached. it needs to be mixed better, its sound too hard & edgy. it sounds the playback was mixed by someone else & the vocals are just raw + leveled to somehow match the playback.
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TripleM
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Sounded decent to me for the most part.
I think the song needs more low end. Needs a bass part.
The rap stuff was fairly well done. The singing in the chorus was pitchy in spots.
Some good lines and good rhymes.
I think the song needs more low end. Needs a bass part.
The rap stuff was fairly well done. The singing in the chorus was pitchy in spots.
Some good lines and good rhymes.
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sicko31298
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aite coo thank for input ya i didnt make the beat so i really cant make that sound any better .. n i mixed the vocals the beat was already done..n there not raw i got a lil comp,reverb,eq.....any sugestions on how to make them sit together better?? n ya iknow chorus was pitchy really first time tryin to sing like that...but thx.....and ill try to add a lil bass to it.. keep the construtive critisism comin
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sicko31298
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k this is the most recent let me know what ya think...