Dude... "No Love" - you need to have a look at your Soundcloud wave picture... see that sudden increase in the middle where you raised the master volume from 1.43 for about 4 seconds whilst you did the big vocal note? Sticks out like dog's balls... I'd be undoing that if I were you.
And I'm not trying to give you a hard time here, but the solo following is seriously out of time in places and doesn't "flow" - it's almost like you stop and think "what'll I play next...?"
At 2.18 your backing volume ducks down... it's noticeable... it's not good. Again... at 3.01 - same thing, but not quite as noticeable... again at 3.19.... then "Loooove" at 3.25 is flat... more ducking at 3.42 And somewhere in the middle of all that, your voice is clipping or distorted... whichever... it doesn't sound good.
In the early parts there are bits (0.48 and 0.52) where your voice disappears into the backing...
Look, there's a good song in there... but even with my tiny headphones at my work PC I'm hearing these major issues.... how is it that you can't, would be my question? Back to work on this one.
I didn't listen to the second one as you've got enough to do on the first.
Good luck, and thanks for sharing. Keep at it.
