First impressions...I think the instruments need to be a little louder. Turn the vocal down a tiny bit. Bring the snare up. Sounds like its pretty far away. I want the drums to be a lot bigger. Send your drums off to a reverb send. Use some compression and bring up the room sound. Get 'em bigger!
Cool song tho brotha. I really like the kick. Sounds nice a thwapy. Good volume, too. The OH should be wider...did you have one OH mic?
The drums sound very sloppy making the timing sound not that good. The crashes are too loud. Some vocal parts are pitchy. the mix itself sounds pretty loose, I don't feel the different instruments gelling together. This is a good song which could be better.