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[subvibe]

Hi
here is a new song i have done Its pop with a retro soul feel

Thanks for taking the time to Listen

subvibe

 

[TripleM]

Sounded good. Nice singing voice. Cool use of Autotune. Choice of sounds overall was very good.

Song doesn't seem to really go anywhere lyrically. Repetition of lines gets a little.... repetitive?

Little pop at 1:53

Slightly strange keyboard edits at :07 and 1:32

 

[JAPOV]

The vocal rhythm is syncopated... I think this needs an odd 1/2 time beat, something less repetitive and 4/4.