My first impression is that you have an 80's thing going on with the percussion.... overloaded reverb with a fast attack and release...
I am listening as I type, so this might sound a little bit convoluted...
There's a little too much bottom on your main guitar. When it's playing the mirror riff with the bass it drowns the bass out...
Also that same guitar is kind of loud in the mix. It almost distorts when it kicks in, in a jarring kind of way.
Nice tune, though. Something I can listen to on headphones at low volumes and relax to. Just a few tweaks and it's there.