Aussie Asking for thoughts

[Bazra]

Hey there guys and girls I have done a song which is only recorded very roughly and I am just looking for some feedback.
http://www.mp3.com.au/artist.asp?id=12492

I hope to hear from some other like minded musicians as I am going to be going into the studio to record some new material for a new release.
Peace out

 

[sandwiches]

hey mate

i listened to that track.

it sounds like it's pretty "rough". it really is hard to make out whether the song was good or not. i cannot really hear the vocals too clearly and the singing is mumbled.

the drums are also... chaotic? need to be more tight? i assume u want critique on the song, maybe you should send us a better version of it.


cheers

 

[Rhythmschism]

Hm, I'm not sure how you recorded this, but I just threw up one sm57 in the middle of my band's last rehearsal and it sounded infinitely better. Like what has already been said, being able to hear the song with at least some degree of accuracy will yield more relevant critiques.