Hey man...a couple of disclaimers from me: first, this isn't really my genre, so take it for what it's worth. Second, I have absolutely no hearing in my right ear...zero...some kind of sinus weirdness.
Man, I really shouldn't even try this with no ears, but to me, it sounds like the music bed is really heavy in the low end...which is making it muffled. The only mids I'm getting are from the vocal, which (I think) has way to many mids in it. On the vocal, the level seems to be jumping around a lot...so you might think about compressing it some more. I like the lead(s)...no complaints from me there at all. The effect you're using on the vocal at some points is kinda' grating on me, b/c it sounds like it's distorting...I know it's an effect, but still...and there are places where I think the vocal *IS* distorting...like @:39 "Too much _______, and not enough good? "...whatever that word is where I put the blank sounds distorted to me. I think some verb on the vocal might make it sit a little better too.
The drums don't bug me, but they rarely do, LOL.
Dude, I really REALLY think you should take this with a grain of salt, because EVERYTHING sounds muffled to me right now. If this sounds pretty negative, it's not meant to be...I just don't feel comfortable commenting on whether or not I like an overall song that's so far afield from what I do. This could be the greatest Nu Metal song ever recorded, and I wouldn't have a clue...(is it "nu metal?"...what IS "nu metal," LOL)
Good luck,
Chris