Any Thoughts on my new love ballad?

[JordanD]

i've been locked away making my new album! its coming out in a week! i thought i'd post the latest song i just did "Oh Woman Oh My" its a nice love song! that has a sad meaning! after all the sadness in my life, i just wanted to wash a lot away.

Oh Woman Oh mp333333My.mp3 - 5.55MB

Oh Woman Oh My

if anyone wants to add piano i think it'd sound nice!

 

[Strumbone]

First thing is noise on left channel. You definitely have some range in vocal category...wish I did. Guitar was smooth and well reproduced IMO.

 

[JordanD]

thanks strumbone! i scrapped the album and im going in a totally different direction!