Any feedback on this track?

[AaronGeorge]

A sample of a song I'm working with:

http://soundcloud.com/aarongeorge/sieze-the-day

Any thoughts?

-aaron

 

[kcearl]

cant really say much about the tracks dynamics as im stuck in the middle of asia with shitty headphones..

I loved the sampled loop...really nice sound to it..and the mix when you come in sounds pretty seamless to me..

I like the melody and what you're doing with it..I hear a little bit off tune/wobble on the vocals at around 36 seconds..maybe try and fix that but i guess this is only a sample so far..

nice stuff Aaron, hope to hear the finished version

 

[AaronGeorge]

cant really say much about the tracks dynamics as im stuck in the middle of asia with shitty headphones..

I loved the sampled loop...really nice sound to it..and the mix when you come in sounds pretty seamless to me..

I like the melody and what you're doing with it..I hear a little bit off tune/wobble on the vocals at around 36 seconds..maybe try and fix that but i guess this is only a sample so far..

nice stuff Aaron, hope to hear the finished version

Thank You

I checked out the vocal part at 0:36 but my vocals end around at 0:34 and I didn't really hear anything off tune...but i'll re-do the chorus again when I get to the finished part

 

[ido1957]

The intro seems kinda thin compared to the main part. I'd suggest beefing that up so its not as different. The main part sounds well mixed - nice reverb on the vocals (for a reverb junkie like me) - very nice. Great work, progressing well....

 

[kcearl]

Thank You

I checked out the vocal part at 0:36 but my vocals end around at 0:34 and I didn't really hear anything off tune...but i'll re-do the chorus again when I get to the finished part

yeah I wouldnt sweat it...I could only get a dial up so the download was pretty jumpy, 34, 36, 22, 49, lol...gave up trying to listen to any others after your song

ido's got a point...beefing up the intro would sound better...