Any feedback for this track is appreciated!

[wakeup89]

Hi, just finished up this nonsense-of-a-track, give it a listen if you feel like it and if got any feedback or opinions for it that would be great and I`ll be sure to return that. So have a listen, it`s not like you have better stuff to do right now.

 

[etfonehome]

I prefer my music a little bit more melodic, but I can understand the sort of "chill" atmosphere you were trying to create. I liked the end, but I feel like it doesn't belong with the song. It's almost as if you tacked it on as an afterthought.
Also, you might want to give credit to Suzanne Vega for the vocals n' stuff, even if you don't plan on selling it or anything.