Any feedback at all

[wilko]

Hi Folks,

So far I have had 20 people download the song from my website but I haven't got any feedback at all - is it really that bad?

Before I go and top myself, I 'll post the lyrics and the website one more time and see if I can get a reaction!

The Website is www.bugeikan.com/nick

I'd really appreciate any feedback at all!

Thanks


Eleanor

Eleanor isn’t ashamed
She knows it’s not her fault
Just who is to blame
She doesn’t give it a second thought
You know they’re all the same”
Was her quiet retort
“I won’t give myself away
Unless there’s a price to pay”

One more chance to lose
Something left to prove
Please get in my way
I’ll make you sorry you stayed

He sighs at the corner stop
Waiting for the invisible bus
She pulls up right ahead
A driver he thinks he can trust
“Won’t you get in my friend?
Have you got some time to spend?
I’m sure we can agree
A deal to some mutual lust…”

One more chance to lose
Something left to prove
Please get in my way
I’ll make you sorry you stayed

“You seem as though you’re afraid..”
“Is there something you want to say?”
“‘Help me on my way…”
“I’m glad you came to my aid..”
Eleanor now isn’t sure
She thinks she might lose the game
Maybe they’re not all the same
For every ill there must be a cure

Always gamble to win
Hope is not a sin
Please get in my way
I’m so glad that you stayed….

 

[Rstiltskin]

no one ever lost mone underestimating the stupidity...

Hi Folks,

So far I have had 20 people download the song from my website but I haven't got any feedback at all - is it really that bad?

Before I go and top myself, I 'll post the lyrics and the website one more time and see if I can get a reaction!

The Website is www.bugeikan.com/nick

I'd really appreciate any feedback at all!

Thanks


Eleanor

Eleanor isn’t ashamed
She knows it’s not her fault
Just who is to blame
She doesn’t give it a second thought
You know they’re all the same”
Was her quiet retort
“I won’t give myself away
Unless there’s a price to pay”

One more chance to lose
Something left to prove
Please get in my way
I’ll make you sorry you stayed

He sighs at the corner stop
Waiting for the invisible bus
She pulls up right ahead
A driver he thinks he can trust
“Won’t you get in my friend?
Have you got some time to spend?
I’m sure we can agree
A deal to some mutual lust…”

One more chance to lose
Something left to prove
Please get in my way
I’ll make you sorry you stayed

“You seem as though you’re afraid..”
“Is there something you want to say?”
“‘Help me on my way…”
“I’m glad you came to my aid..”
Eleanor now isn’t sure
She thinks she might lose the game
Maybe they’re not all the same
For every ill there must be a cure

Always gamble to win
Hope is not a sin
Please get in my way
I’m so glad that you stayed….

of the buying public. I mean have you ever listened to the lyrics of Jumpin Jack Flash?

the lyrics as a story don't really gel for me....like tangled up in blue does, .for instance....and as stream of consiousnes it is a little to reality oriented.

but look at eltons first couple of albums when he and benie taupin were together, hardly any of them make much sense, and i think it is the best stuff he has ever done.

my suggestion is go out and gig some, are people tappin there feet? are they throwen money on the stage, or are they saying 'you are interupting my drinking?'

you are either doing this for a public response, or to please yourself. if you are happy, good! other wise put it in the public face (many at once) and see what happens.

 

[Rstiltskin]

ps....do you live on ulster or alma?

 

[wilko]

Feedback

ps....do you live on ulster or alma?

Thanks for your feedback. This song we have had good reaction when played live and even better reaction when listening to the actual recorded song. Did you download the song too?

Ulster or Alma are both streets in Hamilton NZ - I presume that's what you meant! Nope I live out in Rukuhia just sounth of Hamilton.