RushPfeiffer
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Any tips or criticism on my structure?
It's not easy to offer on point critique in respect of structure for a couple pf reasons, but I'll give it a go. The first third or so became a laborious towards the end of that section, possibly because I wasn't getting all of the lyrics due to the treatment you've given them to try and get them to sit in the mix. Personally I'd have liked that section to have shown more signs of heading towards a transition with a gradual building of tension towards the latter part where it picks up. The dialect is not an issue for me, but I need the diction to be more transparent. It is kind of endearing in a melodic sense and certainly worth getting right. I'll reserve my thoughts in respect of additional aspects in light of your very clearly asking for comments around structure.
Regards
Tim
A lot of fancy words there lol
So you think people could see the structure of the song more clearly if I pronounced words better?
Anything is welcome dude
A lot of fancy words there lol
So you think people could see the structure of the song more clearly if I pronounced words better?
Anything is welcome dude
Why the hell else would we hang out here, if we didn't enjoy helping others?