ah, the speed is much better now.
in my experience download.com is pretty intermittent because it's in such high demand.
cool song. definitely reminded me immediately of the beatles. somehow you got the same thinnish vocal sound, too.
BG vox are too loud, especially the ones on the right side. they're thicker than the lead vox, which is a pretty big no-no.
the mix is simple and dry but it works. rather 'vintage' vibe.
the wah-wah guitar solo seemed a little out of place for the song. but i guess that's just a style thing.
melodies are great. lyrics are excellent too, though i would've maybe added another part in there for a little less repetition.
the fade-out at the end is too long.
good going and good luck!
ps. why are you listed under 'emo?'
edit: the snare sound is bugging me. it's very woody and midrangey. try to bring out the snares more and cut the woodiness. mix in a bit of drumagog if you have to.